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7 comments:

Bonnie Lee said...

The sun begins to rise bright and early - I hear "Wake up!" "Wake up!" "Rise and Shine!" Mom and dad are shaking me back and forth.

I’m Up – I’m Up! At least I think I am.

Mom gives me a big hug and says do your best Sadie. Dad says "GO GO SADIE!"

Slowly I climb down from the tree and follow the path to the Junglerun starting line. Lots of my friends are running the race.

From up in the trees I hear “Sadie why are you running the race?” “You are the slowest animal in the Jungle!”

I know this is true; it makes me want to cry – but I remember what my family told me – to do my best, GO GO SADIE!

Bonnie Lee said...

Add another set of sneakers on the tree.

Text:

Slowly I climb down from the tree and follow the path to the Junglerun starting line.

Yiggi and Dora ask me “Sadie why are you running the race?” “You are the slowest animal in the Jungle!”

I know this is true; it makes me feel sad – but I remember what my mom told me this morning - "GO GO SADIE!"

Bonnie Lee said...

Slowly I climb down my tree and go to the Junglerun starting line.

Dora asks me “Sadie why are you running the race?” “You are the slowest animal in the Jungle!”

I know this is true; it makes me feel sad – but I remember what my mom told me this morning - "GO GO SADIE!"

Bonnie Lee said...

Remember to change the text to:


Slowly I climb down my tree and go to the Junglerun starting line.

Dora asks me “Sadie why are you running the race?” “You are the slowest animal in the Jungle!”

I know this is true; it makes me feel sad – but I remember what my mom told me this morning - "GO GO SADIE!"

Bonnie Lee said...

Please add another 2 pages -

One page with mom waking Sadie - and the next page with Sadie coming down the tree.

One page with Sadie walking to the Starting Line - Second side is fine with what you have now.

Bonnie Lee said...

Sadie looks very outlined - can you "fluff her up" and bit so she doesn't look so "cut and paste" Thanks.

Bonnie Lee said...

Missing Cruz the Crocodile & Lorenzo(Starting Line)