Page 2&3 I think the dart frogs take away from Sadie being the star in the Beginning. Can you remove the two on page 3? Thanks!
Page 6 & 7 Can you have some brown tones to the volcano? I attached a picture, also attached is a picture of the ocean front and other flowers that grow in trees. Remove yellow and blue frog by Sadie.
Page 19 & 21 Dart frogs are super cute - but remove these two - a little over kill ;) A little dart frog goes a long way!
Pages 22-23 Remove all the dart frogs except the two at the end of the branch by Bonita (green). (Dart frogs are not in trees so much - they like to stay on the Jungle Floor) - But I love the two little green ones in the trees.
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Dedicated to The House of Shinderman, Zimbalist and Scot.
In Loving Memory of Elyse, Moshe & Joel
Dedicated to The House of Shinderman, Zimbalist and Scot.
In Loving Memory of Elyse, Moshe & Joel
not sure about the eyelashes :)
Can you make her nose similar to the one on the cover page? Thanks.
Page 2&3
I think the dart frogs take away from Sadie being the star in the Beginning. Can you remove the two on page 3? Thanks!
Page 6 & 7
Can you have some brown tones to the volcano? I attached a picture, also attached is a picture of the ocean front and other flowers that grow in trees.
Remove yellow and blue frog by Sadie.
Page 19 & 21
Dart frogs are super cute - but remove these two - a little over kill ;) A little dart frog goes a long way!
Pages 22-23
Remove all the dart frogs except the two at the end of the branch by Bonita (green).
(Dart frogs are not in trees so much - they like to stay on the Jungle Floor) - But I love the two little green ones in the trees.
-- Thank you - keep up the great work!
Remove Written by and Illustrated by - this is a dedication page :)
Thanks.
Remove GO GO SADIE
This is a dedication page
Dedicated to The House of Zimbalist Mom, Dad and Scot.
In Loving Memory of Elyse, Moshe & Joel
Dedicated to Mom, Dad & Scot
Special thanks to The House of Zimbalist
In Loving Memory of Elyse, Moshe & Joel
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