Erin - can you change the the sloths to your I love your shy smile picture sloths? I really love the way the mom and baby look on that? Also we are going to have to change the font for the text. I need it to be either Times New Roman or even Garmond.
Hola! That means hello in Spanish, my name is Sadie and I am a three-toed sloth. I love to sleep; I can sleep up to 18 hours a day. That’s a really long nap! How long do you like to sleep?
I hang upside down most of the time and blend in with the trees, moving very slowly so I don’t attract too much attention. I am very shy.
Erin!!!! Great job! I fell in love the minute I saw it! Thank you - I truly adore the way this looks! The text is reading better too (font-wise) Thank you for your work!!!
Can you add some "grit" to the mother's claws - they look too clean. I like the contrast shading you have on your "I love your shy smile" sloth. Thanks.
(Page 2) Hola! That means hello in Spanish, my name is Sadie and I am a three-toed sloth. I love to sleep; I can sleep up to 18 hours a day. That’s a really long nap! How long do you like to sleep?
(Page 3) I hang upside down most of the time and blend in with the trees, moving very slowly so I don’t attract too much attention.
This isn't a good first page in my opinion. When you open the book it doesn't blow me away - it's looks empty and mis-shapen. The tree doesn't look right - and what's with the plant? I have never seen plants grow on trees like that? I thought you were going to send me a sketch first?
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Hi Erin, that should be That. Hola! That means (capitalize T, remove the hyphen. Thank you.)
Erin - can you change the the sloths to your I love your shy smile picture sloths? I really love the way the mom and baby look on that? Also we are going to have to change the font for the text. I need it to be either Times New Roman or even Garmond.
Hola! That means hello in Spanish, my name is Sadie and I am a three-toed sloth.
I love to sleep; I can sleep up to 18 hours a day. That’s a really long nap! How long do you like to sleep?
I hang upside down most of the time and blend in with the trees, moving very slowly so I don’t attract too much attention. I am very shy.
Erin!!!! Great job! I fell in love the minute I saw it! Thank you - I truly adore the way this looks! The text is reading better too (font-wise) Thank you for your work!!!
NICE CLAWS!!!!
Can you add some "grit" to the mother's claws - they look too clean. I like the contrast shading you have on your "I love your shy smile" sloth. Thanks.
(Page 2)
Hola! That means hello in Spanish, my name is Sadie and I am a three-toed sloth.
I love to sleep; I can sleep up to 18 hours a day. That’s a really long nap! How long do you like to sleep?
(Page 3)
I hang upside down most of the time and blend in with the trees, moving very slowly so I don’t attract too much attention.
Sadie looks like a snowball ;) She lost her "slothness" Also her arm looks disfigured. Need some help with this still.
This isn't a good first page in my opinion. When you open the book it doesn't blow me away - it's looks empty and mis-shapen. The tree doesn't look right - and what's with the plant? I have never seen plants grow on trees like that? I thought you were going to send me a sketch first?
I'm sorry - I was rough on you re these pages - Do you have any suggestions?
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