Sadie doesn't have enough texture - I like that the pages are dedicated to her - but she looks too flat to me. The background look nice but I don't think the dust cloud works well here. Add a butterfly nesting on her backside - makes it funny that she is not moving - then the butterfly can fly off when she actually goes.
Text should read:
Page 24: GO GO SADIE!
Page 25: I don’t go very fast but guess what? I Go!
9 comments:
I listen to the voice inside my head – GO GO SADIE! And you know what? I go! I don’t go very fast but I Go!
WONDERFUL! Well done! Just remove the white circle from the sneakers since they look like converse knock-offs. (No product placement) :)
Lets go back to the original eye-color (dark brown) I think see looks cuter this way.
Thanks.
Sadie doesn't have enough texture - I like that the pages are dedicated to her - but she looks too flat to me. The background look nice but I don't think the dust cloud works well here. Add a butterfly nesting on her backside - makes it funny that she is not moving - then the butterfly can fly off when she actually goes.
Text should read:
Page 24:
GO GO SADIE!
Page 25:
I don’t go very fast but guess what? I Go!
I like when you add fur texture so there are no actually straight lines in the outline of the character.
Page 21 is a great example how you gave Sadie that "fuzzy" look.
Picture looks great!
Make Text bigger on GO GO SADIE -
How about adding a butterfly on her left front sneaker? Resting butterfly - may look cute.
(Let's try) Change the font GO GO SADIE to the way it will look on the title. Perhaps this will give it a more child-like feel.
Page 24:
GO GO SADIE!
Page 25:
Guess what? I don’t go very fast, but I GO!
Remove GO GO SADIE
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