Lorenzo owns the shoe store my mom takes me to. Lorenzo brings me a pair of bright orange sneakers. Orange is my favorite color. What's your favorite color?
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It's hard for me to tie the laces on my shoes; my nails are great for hanging upside down on a tree, but not for lacing up my sneakers. Luckily Lorenzo offers to help me out. Gracias Lorenzo! Thank means Thank you in Spanish.
Erin - these pages look really great! I think Lorenzo replacing Mateo work a lot better. There is more continuation with this character and don't think I didn't notice the change orange color of his arm ;) GREAT TOUCH!
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It's hard for me to tie the laces on my shoes. My claws are great for hanging upside down on a tree, but not for lacing up my sneakers.
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GOOD JOB ERIN!
Lorenzo owns the shoe store my mom takes me to. Lorenzo brings me a pair of bright orange sneakers. Orange is my favorite color. What's your favorite color?
(First Page)
(Second Page)
It's hard for me to tie the laces on my shoes; my nails are great for hanging upside down on a tree, but not for lacing up my sneakers. Luckily Lorenzo offers to help me out. Gracias Lorenzo! Thank means Thank you in Spanish.
Erin - these pages look really great! I think Lorenzo replacing Mateo work a lot better. There is more continuation with this character and don't think I didn't notice the change orange color of his arm ;) GREAT TOUCH!
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It's hard for me to tie the laces on my shoes. My claws are great for hanging upside down on a tree, but not for lacing up my sneakers.
Luckily Lorenzo offers to help me out.
Gracias Lorenzo!
That means thank you in Spanish.
Mom and I go to to Lorenzo’s Sports Store.
Lorenzo brings me a pair of bright orange sneakers to try on.
Orange is my favorite color.
What's your favorite color?
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It's hard for me to tie the laces on my shoes. My claws are great for hanging upside down on a tree, but not for lacing up my sneakers.
Luckily Lorenzo offers to help me out.
Gracias Lorenzo!
Gracias means thank you in Spanish.
Glasses are cute - but Lorenzo is cuter without them - can you remove them?
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